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ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
Fic: Naked Under Here [Jared/Jensen, NC-17, 11k] by Fleshflutter

http://community.livejournal.com/spn_reversebang/14076.html
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
Art post is locked. If the one posted in the fic is anything to go by, though... It looks like it was colored in Paint. :X
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I liked this fic. The amount of detail is amazing. Sometimes it comes off as a lot of name-dropping because you're getting a crash-course in the superhero/supervillain names, but it evens out after awhile. I appreciated how--in typical comic book fashion--Jared and Jensen are each given a "greatest failure" moment.

This really plays like a comic book, actually. An incredibly PORNY comic book but that only makes it better IMO. :D

A few things that kind of bugged me: the Js having sex right after Jared rescued Jen. ...Wouldn't there be a possibility of their teammates getting, you know, slaughtered while they're busy fucking? Not even a little bit on concern?

The only other thing that bothered me is just my OTP-gene getting in the way. I really wanted the boys to have finished hashing out their issues (at least partially) and get their HEA.

But those are really kind of minor. Overall, definitely worth a read.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
There was a single line about the fight being over I think because that was irritating me too.

Aside from that, agree about the lack of HEA but liked it a lot overall otherwise.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
Not just the question of the fight being over, but that Jen is shackled to the wall and has been used as a human battery for days, and he might, you know, want to be let down from the wall and get a little time to recuperate before having Jared slamming into him. It made that sex scene not terribly enjoyable for me.

I was unhappy with the lack of HEA at first, but it made sense the more I thought about it: Jared needs Jensen to be ready to unmask himself, not have it done for him, and the tone of the ending was such that it's probably going to happen in the not-too-distant future.
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ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I didn't really like this fic. For the same reasons listed above. The sex scene at the end didn't make sense. I like pwps, but usually she does a better job of blending characterization and porn, and this just didn't have it. I liked the first half, but the second half basically ruined it, so i can't really say i'd recommend it.

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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I really really liked this, I did. I just love masks so much. And her sex is brilliant, as usual. I'm not a comic person and I was worried I wouldn't click wit this fic, but the world-building was great.

But it also felt sort of, superficial? I don't know. Possibly I just have crazy-high expectations. Or possibly I haven't read a lot of J2 AU lately and am out of the habit.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
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Kind of agree. I absolutely loved the fic but I think it shows that her heart isn't in fandom anymore too. Would definitely still recommend it though.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
The second sex scene was so out of place. I like dub-con, but this seemed just wrong. Jared is supposed to be a big damn superhero and yet he happily coerces a drugged and exhausted Jen into sex? The fuck?

How about releasing him, getting him home and showing that you do actually want him for more than an orgasm?

Characterization fail.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I think it's more a case of kink-fail for you. It really worked for me.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
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I thought it worked with Jared's characterization as very pushy where Jensen was involved. He didn't come across as a perfect hero.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I feel like FF tends to have one sex scene that squicks me in many of her fics. I felt the same way about the climactic sex scene in Antichrist's Bride. Not that it was dub-con in the same way, but "Sam fucks Dean so hard Dean faints" is distasteful rather than hot to me. I prefer it when top isn't OTT, I guess.

But I liked a lot of this one, and I liked the ending a lot.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
Oh man, I wish the art had been better. I think it's pretty crappy, which makes me even more sad because I loved the fic to bits, and I wish the art had been equally awesome.

As for the story, I went in with high expectations because a) it's FF and b) I'd partially skimmed this thread prior to reading the fic and I noticed some nonnies weren't too happy.

I thought the fic was fantastic. It really felt like a superhero story because of the character names, the various stand-offs mentioned, the alternate timeline failures, etc.

While the last sex scene wasn't 100% to my liking (even though I enjoy dubcon), I didn't find it OOC. I thought it was quite well-established that Jared's thought process was a tad skewed whenever Jensen was involved and he almost felt frenzied in his need for him. With the guys having been separated for some time and Jared not knowing if he'd be able to save Jensen or himself, I treated that scene as frenzied "I need to fuck you to establish we're still alive" sex. And I like that Jared was self-aware enough to realise it was a douche move afterwards.

I think the ending is what made me happiest. I don't need a clearly laid out HEA conclusion, and I think it would've made this fic typical and boring if that had been the case. Jared needed Jensen to make the decision about unmasking, and the story ends on a high enough note to imply that something like that is definitely possible in the future.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
I usually like dubcon but this didn't work for me at all. Might be the first time FF hasn't turned me on with a sex scene. Well written but overall I'd give it a C. The story just didn't engage me.
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Re: ReverseBB: [Prompt 2013] by eleke / Naked Under Here by Fleshflutter (J2)

(Anonymous)
Art's meh, and I haven't read the fic yet.
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