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DCBB: Where We're Heading To [gen/pre-slash, PG] by yeclek

(Anonymous)
Art by caz2y5

http://community.livejournal.com/deancasbigbang/42313.html
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Re: DCBB: Where We're Heading To [gen/pre-slash, PG] by yeclek

(Anonymous)
Anyone read this? Verdict?
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Re: DCBB: Where We're Heading To [gen/pre-slash, PG] by yeclek

(Anonymous)
I really try not to be nasty when I review but this isn't very good. The writing is very stilted... like, junior high level. I can't honestly tell whether that is intentional (ie, that it's a spoof) or not, and POV is all over the place - it seems to change within sentences let alone paragraphs.

I'd pass. In fact I wish I had.
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Re: DCBB: Where We're Heading To [gen/pre-slash, PG] by yeclek

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I just started this, I don't think the prose is bad, just simplistic.

This part made me pause:
"I am merely showing concern for our fearless leader," Raphael answered. Castiel felt a bit of chill at that, an echo of a future that might have been, but Raphael continued nonetheless.

Did Castiel ever learn about the possible future Dean saw? Putting aside the fact that it might've all been an illusion set up by Zachariah to manipulate Dean, this throwaway line of a detail Castiel hasn't been canonically been shown to know really jarred me. You can fanwank it away easily, but I don't think I should have to.


The human in question jumped up from the couch and spun around. "Jesus, Cas! I didn't even hear you!"

Castiel graced this comment with a tilt of his head. "Hear me?" he asked, puzzled.

"Yeah," Dean nodded, relaxing at the familiar sight of trench coat and bedraggled bed head. "Usually I can hear your wings when you pop in."

Oh... okay, then.
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