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Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Fic: What Consumes Your Thoughts Controls Your Life
by gestaltrose

http://community.livejournal.com/spn_reversebang/8335.html
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
I don't have any strong feelings about this other than I didn't like it. I hoped it would get better towards the end but it didn't. I really disliked the monster too. Felt out of character. Anyone else?
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Second paragraph: Sam's been raped (by possessed!Dean). He gets into the Impala to escape, and puts Metallica into the tape deck to calm himself down.

ಠ_ಠ

Characterization fail of that magnitude, in the second paragraph? Not reading on.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Yeah, it gets worse.

Dean was as heterosexual as a man could get and Sam never doubted that if Dean found out about his biggest secret, then nothing would make him stay. Sam wanting, needing demon blood hadn't scared him off but his secret desire would have.

Because being a homo is so much worse than drinking blood.

But really...there are so many things wrong here. It's basically possessed Dean rapes Sam repeatedly, then Sam does it back to Dean, winds up impregnating the original creature...it goes on, cliches out the wazoo, then ends with Dean admitting that he shares Sam's sick desires (which essentially were what caused Sam to enjoy his rape, that and drinking Dean's blood, which is apparently addictive for some reason) and all is well and presumably they fucked happily ever after. This premise would be a tough sell by a skilled author, and it would definitely take a lot more than five or six thousand words to do it justice. That's probably one reason why the storytelling is so flat and monotonous here.

Also, the she lists two betas...you'd think one of them could have caught all the punctuation errors, particularly missing commas.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
NA

I haven't read the fic, but the bit you quoted, would Sam's shame be referring to the incestual desires instead of homosexuality?
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Possibly. The principle still holds.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Sure, but it's not on to equate a squick to incest as a squick to homosexuality, as the comparison above made.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
SA

The problem wasn't that "incest = homosexuality"; it was the implication that "incest = blood-drinking" OR "homosexuality = blood-drinking" in the context of Dean's POV, i.e. which of the three Dean would think was worst (or relatively worse if we're talking between two of the three choices).

Imma vote blood-drinking, especially if it's addictive demon Dean-blood.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Fun with frogs for the entire year?
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Except on leap years.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_ZnyAc58eQ
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
Trigger warning: suggestive animal cruelty.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
SA

Suggestive OF animal cruelty, not sexy animal cruelty.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
you know someone out there'd fap to that.
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Re: Reverse BB: What if? [Sam/Dean, Adult] by FROGGYFUN365

(Anonymous)
AYRT

They're not who I care about.
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