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Big Bang/Exchange Fic Discussion #1
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Post your threads for Big Bangs and exchange fics here.

Format like so:


SUBJECT: Title [Pairing, Rating] by AUTHOR
CONTENT: Art by whoever

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REVERSE BB: Art by Kasmodia - "More than a man" by rozabellalove [J2 - NC17]

(Anonymous)
Link to art: http://kasmodia.livejournal.com/24774.html#cutid1

Link to fic: http://rozabellalove.livejournal.com/73466.html
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Re: REVERSE BB: Art by Kasmodia - "More than a man" by rozabellalove [J2 - NC17]

(Anonymous)
I felt a little uncomfortable with the art. It was very shiny, I suppose.

The fic made my head hurt. I guess I liked the premise but the sudden, breakneck shifts in characterisation, the way that ALL moral issues were ignored. Just made me shiver with bad.
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Re: REVERSE BB: Art by Kasmodia - "More than a man" by rozabellalove [J2 - NC17]

(Anonymous)
Jensen seems to go from pissed to completely sympathetic to I don't even know really fast.

Moral issues like how could Jared ever think that it would be okay with creating a sextoy using the image of his ex-boyfriend. That's he's really a good guy, really! He's just lonely, that's all! And look, he stops using the bot once he realizes that it really bothers Jensen! That should totes count for something!

Why would the company be insistent on Jared using that particular bot's likeness anyway? If the creator protested, wouldn't they just shrug and say "Well make a new one"?

IDK. I started skim-reading at about the middle and then gave up before I hit the end.
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Re: REVERSE BB: Art by Kasmodia - "More than a man" by rozabellalove [J2 - NC17]

(Anonymous)
Art: I'm kind of meh about the art. It's okay. Not spectacular but okay.

Fic: I really liked the premise (lol, sexbots) and thought that it could have been good but this fic just isn't it.

Couple of major problems with this fic. There is an extreme overuse of telling versus showing (there were many times in the fic where the author could have just SHOWN the characteristics or motivation but instead just wanted to TELL us) and there are also some extreme moral issues that are completely ignored. There's also characterization issues that are all over the map (shifting and changing) and the whole thing is completely over the top so much that it hurts.

Anybody else feel sorry for the bot?
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