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spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
Fic by dragonspell

http://spn-reversebang.livejournal.com/96168.html

word count - 12,900

Summary: Jensen is a brilliant if under-appreciated scientist. His lab is a little rundown but Jensen knows that he's close to a scientific breakthrough that's going to cement his place in history--if only he could spend a little less time drooling over his gorgeous (but straight) research partner and got a little more sleep. When Jensen receives the news, though, that his department is about to be shut down, he knows that close isn't going to cut it. He needs results and quick.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
Lovely art (obviously)
I'm looking forward to reading this. I enjoy dragonspell's writing and they usually cater quite well to my manhandling kink.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
Hated it. F- There is this great build up and premise that never lived up to the expectations nor art. Mention of Christian ( who has nothing to do with the story) Danneel, Misha, Gen and Sandy. But the ending seemed ham fisted. Getting together in the last 3 or so paragraphs of a 2 parter with almost no sexual tension or chemistry.DO NOT WANT.

It reads as this. Super Nerd Jensen who is oh so smart and OBVS a virgin cause he is 17 and working for some shady scientists dominates his life but omg has a crush on Jared the straight and previously dating Sandy co-worker. Gen pops up as a wedding to Jared hungry sub plot. There is a LOL cat who provides neither LOL nor cat mischief. People mentioned but never seen, Misha is all 'Yeah Bra use my equipment as I go off and talk about Ewoks' There is tech talk but enough to get by nothing serious like oh code code shit something is wrong and then BAM, MAJICAL POWERS YO. Where in Jared can move shit with his mind and Jensen has a Zeus complex going on and after no tension whatsoever Jared thinks and practices and then kisses Jensen with no lead up whatsoever. Moving on to the sex which really did nothing at all to make the plot amazing aside from wacky hijinx powers LOOK HOW WE FLOAT AND I MAKE EVERY LIGHTBULB EXPLODE WITH THE FORCE OF MY NON ADULT ORGASM.

Yeah really :/ and i was so excited for this fic too. Sorry if the review seems a little harsh. Just very very disappointed. There was the use of other people who really had no need to be in a fic that short, and not only that but the charming first few paragraphs could have led up to something being amazing, it feels like a firework that has the fuse only to be stamped out before it shoots off into the sky.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
NA

Huh. Dragonspell usally works for me, guess I will report back tomorrow if i agree with you nonnie. :) (Unless i get my SWTOR invite tomorrow, then I'm off to space adventures!)
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
AYRT

Yeah Dragonspell usually works for me too, but it's sometimes a hit and miss, I adored last years RBB and In it for love and the porn one shots. Some of the other work though :/. Ohh I hope you get your SWTOR invite. I have to wait till next week for mine.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
na

I finally got around to reading this and I didn't love it either. It was just kind of a meh story all around, without much build up to speak of like you said, it is kind of all over the place, and then it just ends. It probably wouldn't have seemed so bad if I wasn't a fan of this author and expecting a little more.

A clarification though, Jensen isn't 17. It says he was 14 and this is 17 years later, so that would make him 31. And while it was worded in a kind of confusing way, I don't think he was a virgin either, just that he thought he was acting like a "scared virgin."
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
na
See, I read it as that he is a virgin, but maybe it's just awkward wording:

Jensen scurried away, trying to pretend that he wasn’t retreating like a scared virgin when he so obviously was

Not that any of this is that important. I didn't even make it through the whole thing despire loving dragonspell dearly.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
NA

Yeah, I'd read that as "when he so obviously was retreating [like a scared virgin]."

I think if they'd meant "he so obviously was" to go with "virgin" they would have said "which he so obviously was" or "like the scared virgin he so obviously was."

OTOH, that is the only sentence of the fic I have read or will read, so I'm just looking at one bit of ambiguous syntax out of context.
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Re: spn_reversebang: Weird Science [J2, NC17] by smallworld_inc

(Anonymous)
a ayrt rt

That's how I read it as well, though it is definitely awkward wording. And the way the sex scene at the end was handled also makes me think Jensen wasn't meant to be a virgin.
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